Overall, this poem was very soft-hearted and tender, almost like a child's innocence. But honestly, I think it could have been a bit more, I don't know what to say, original? Its not that it wasn't deep, but it lacked some seriousness, such as a personal meaning maybe evoked by experiences. This is an excellent poem, but give a little more time to thinking up a thought provoking piece. Thumbs Up though!
Damnit, gotta use up space because it says Im using too little characters to type XD
ARGGGh, still doing it Im very sorry for this unprofessionalism!
AHH, there we go!